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Hello!
My name is Olya.
I am from Russia!
- I am nineteen and I have been studying English during 10 years.
- But unfortunately I am so lazy and my english is not enough good.
- I will be very happy if you help me to improve my skills.

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- My name is Olya.
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- I am from Russia!
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- I am nineteen and I have been studying English during 10 years.
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- I am nineteen and I have been studying English ~~during~~since last 10 years.
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- I am nineteen and I have been studying English ~~during~~for 10 years.
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- But unfortunately I am so lazy and my english is not enough good.
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- But unfortunately I am sovery lazy and my eEnglish is not good enough ~~good~~.
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- But, unfortunately, I am sovery lazy ~~and~~, so my english is not ~~enough~~very good.
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- But unfortunately I am so lazy ~~and~~that my eEnglish is not ~~enough~~very good.
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- I will be very happy if you help me to improve my skills.
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- I will be very happy if you help me to improve my English language skills.
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- I w~~ill be very happy~~ould be glad if you helped me to improve my English speaking skills.
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