添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

Daronitkaからのテキスト - English

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    • Work on picture "Morning in a Pine Forest") In front of me a wonderful picture, which was drawing famous artist Ivan Shishkin.
    • This is a painting of nature titled "Morning in a pine forest".
    • It shows us the most edge of the forest and three bears, which is on it.
    • Behind them is a wonderful scopes of untouched forest. foreground of that picture is a fell trees, which, possible, were broke down of cruel people terrible relating for all our nature.
  • On the fallen tree is sitting two little bears.
    • I think, they walked with mother for the forest, and she is anywhere here too.
    • Near with them is standing the same little bear.
    • He sees somewhere far away.
    • Looking on that picture, I smell wonderful flavour of the morning air.
    • I like this picture, and I want to look on it again and again

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English