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- Life will hit you as he wants and when he wants to.
- She has everything, but just because it gives nothing If you manage to pull something out of her clutches, take care of and appreciate.
- Second time may not be.

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- Life will hit you as he wants and when he wants to.
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- Life will hit you ~~as he wants~~like (??) and when heit wants to.
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- Life will hit you ~~as he~~how it wants and when heit wants to.
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- She has everything, but just because it gives nothing If you manage to pull something out of her clutches, take care of and appreciate.
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- [She has everything, but just because it gives nothing¶If you manage to pull something out of her clutches, take care of and appreciate] смысл того, что ты хотел бы написать, не ясен.
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- ~~She~~It has everything~~, but jus~~ (under control), but because it gives nothing¶I, so if you manage to ~~pull~~get something outr of ~~her clutches, take care of~~it, (please) treasure and appreciate it.
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- She has (got) everything, but ~~just because it gives no~~she just/simply doesn't give away/share anything¶. If you have manage ~~to pull~~d/succeeded to grasp something out of her cl~~utches, take care of~~aws, (then) keep it and appre~~ciate.~~serve/cherish it!
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- Second time may not be.
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- ~~Second time may not be~~There might.may not be a second time / может быть, второго раза не будет.
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- ~~Second time may not be~~There may not always be second chances.
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