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  • Cover letter

    • In my customer service jobs, I always dedicate my time to every individual.
    • My experience in problem solving and complaint managing, next to my wide language abilities allow me to please the customer in an efficient way.
  • My last job in this field, as a tour leader in France, has given me the chance to pursue more goals related to tourism.
    • I consider that I work well under pressure, in a team as good as independently.
    • Therefore, I believe that I would be an ideal candidate to host or assist in the organization of the company events.
    • I would like to apply now all this experience in the accommodation sector, and search for a new opportunity to develop my skills in this field.
    • Therefore I am looking for a company which permits me to enhance my abilities as a receptionist or any vacancy that suits my résumé in the next enrollment procedure that you hold.

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    • My experience in problem solving and complaint managing, next to my wide language abilities allow me to please the customer in an efficient way.
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    • MyI experience tise in solving problem solving and complaint managing, next to my wide language abilities allow me to please the customer in anfor incoming complaints from customer. And my ability to speak multiple language gives edge over others in dealing customer complaints in a efficient way.
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    • My experience in problem solving and complaint managing, next to my wideement, along with my broad language abilities, allows me to please the customer in an efficient waydeliver efficient customer service.
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    • Therefore, I believe that I would be an ideal candidate to host or assist in the organization of the company events.
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    • Therefore, I believe that I would be an ideal candidate to host or assist in theWith those skills i feel would be great asset to your company thereby able to host organizsation of the company eventsevents with ease.
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    • Therefore, I believe that I would be an ideal candidate to host or assist in the organization of theing company events.
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    • I would like to apply now all this experience in the accommodation sector, and search for a new opportunity to develop my skills in this field.
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    • I would likbe able to apply now all this experience in the accommodation sector, and search formy knowledge in housing sector which serves as new opportunity to develop my skills in this fieldavenue to enhance my skills further.
      RuylopezRuylopez profile picture Comments
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    • I would like to apply now all this experience in the accommodation sector, and search for a new opportunity to develop my skills in this field.
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • I would like to apply now all this experience in the accommodation sector, and search for a new opportunity to develop my skills in this field.
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    • Therefore I am looking for a company which permits me to enhance my abilities as a receptionist or any vacancy that suits my résumé in the next enrollment procedure that you hold.
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    • Therefore I am looking for a company which permits me to enhance my abilities as a receptionist or any vacancy that suitsI am available for suitable position, if any, in your organization here by attaching my réesumé in the next enrollment procedure that you hold. ¶
      e for your perusal.
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    • Therefore, I am looking for a company whichthat permits me to enhance my abilities as a receptionist or. I am also open to any vacancy that suits my résumé in the next enrollment procedureevent that you hold. ¶
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