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Text from Daede - English

 
  • My best friend

    • My best friend is Maria.She is a grave and funny.
    • First, she is kind ,I still remember the first holiday with her when we walk on the beach.
    • Maria hurry to help the boy how cry in order to help him .he was Sinking so Maria can help him .The boy thank Maria .she was grave.second, she is funny.
    • When we meet with friends she make some movements which make us laugh.
    • Seriously, Maria is wonderful girl I like her very much.

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