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  • My best friend

    • My best friend is Maria.She is a grave and funny.
    • First, she is kind ,I still remember the first holiday with her when we walk on the beach.
    • Maria hurry to help the boy how cry in order to help him .he was Sinking so Maria can help him .The boy thank Maria .she was grave.second, she is funny.
    • When we meet with friends she make some movements which make us laugh.
    • Seriously, Maria is wonderful girl I like her very much.
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PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sentence 2
    • First, she is kind ,I still remember the first holiday with her when we walk on the beach.
    • First, she is kind. ,I still remember the first holiday with her when we walked on the beach.
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    • Firstly, she is kind. ,I still remember the first holiday with her when we walked on the beach.
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  • Sentence 3
    • Maria hurry to help the boy how cry in order to help him .he was Sinking so Maria can help him .The boy thank Maria .she was grave.second, she is funny.
    • Maria hurryied to help the boy how cry in order to help him .h. He was Ssinking, so Maria can helped him . The boy thanked Maria .s. She wais grave.eat, and second, she is funny.
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    • Maria hurryied to help the boy how cry, who was crying, in order to help him .h. He was Ssinking so Maria can helped him . The boy thanked Maria .s. She was grave.second, she is funnyteful.
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  • Sentence 4
    • When we meet with friends she make some movements which make us laugh.
    • When we meet with friends she make some movementsacts funny which makes us laugh.
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    • When we meet with friends she make some movementsbehaves in a funny way which makes us laugh.
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