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- Hello my name is David I'm from Kyrgyzstan.
- And I really want to learn English please check my text

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МОЛЯ, ПОМОГНЕТЕ ДА КОРИГИГИРАМЕ ВСЯКО ИЗРЕЧЕНИЕ! - English

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- Hello dear ,(miracle00044@yahoo.com)¶how are you today i hope that every thing is alright with you as is my pleasure to contact you when i was browsing and i feel having communication with you if you will have the desire with me so that we can get to know each other better and see what happened in future. I will be very happy if you can write me through my email at (miracle00044@yahoo.com) for easiest communication and to know all about each other for me also to send you my picture, i will be waiting to hear from you as i wish you all the best for your day.¶yours new friend,¶Miracle.
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- Hello my name is David I'm from Kyrgyzstan.
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- Hello, my name is David and I'm from Kyrgyzstan.
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- And I really want to learn English please check my text
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- ~~And~~ I really want to learn English p. Please check my text
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