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Scriptum ab Xinyao_Alice - English

  • A random story (2)

  • I was tired of trying to get a gorgeous fish.
  • It's as big as my hand, but more colorful than any other one.
    • And tired as I was, me and my new friend E didn't want to come back to home, so, we decided to sleep here, in our secret place we had find in the afternoon.
  • The night had come, so hot and so frightening that we were afraid by the silence, the temperature and the weather of this night.
    • It was hot like if we could melt, as we said, but it was also snowing pinky snow.
    • And, one more thing:there was no beast, at least we hadn't see any one, but a noise was all around us, a noise like a beasts gaps.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English