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  • The Piece Of Cheese

    • On one of the summer hottest days, There was a crow standing on a tropical tree with intertwine roots.
    • He was holding a small cheese in his yellowbeak.
  • There was a fox watching him.
    • And seeing the cheese, And he wanted to take it from him, But unfortunately the tree was too high, And there was no way he could climb it.
    • Nor he could fly.
    • So he thought about a great trick to own the cheese.
    • By making the crow singing, and pretending that the crow had a unique voice, he wanted to hear it.
  • When the poor crow opened his mouth to sing, the cheese fell down into the fox's mouth.The fox ate the cheese and felt proud of himself because he won the battle.

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