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Text from andre_feli2 - English

  • how your messege sound?

  • Nowadays it is extremely important to know how to express yourself well, to organize your ideas, to demonstrate knowledge, to express points of view and to show your personality, as they are very important factors in achieving any goals in our lives.
  • But every time you search for public speaking, it is easy to find reports of fear, insecurity and other feelings when speaking in public.
  • Such problems have been suffered by all sorts of people; even the most experienced speakers have felt butterflies in their stomachs before the presentations, perhaps fearing that the lecture would not reach the audience effectively.
  • As an example of this, Tony Robbiens said that he had never relaxed before a starting to prepare himself.
  • So it is extremely important that they have a plan, a good selection of words, a good body language, an appropriate tone of voice and a lot of practice because these are determining factors for a good presentation.
  • Talking about Tony Robbiens who I had chosen previously to consider the best public speaker, not only because if he had not written his books I wouldn’t have created the routine of reading ,but also by the ability that I have been learning from him of word selection.
  • Like most people I've had moments that the exit was not as I expected.
  • One of these moments was in English class when I had made a presentation before the date because I would travel.
  • I intended to pass my message clearly to pass the course.
  • But I must have forgotten a few phrases and it did not sound like I expected.
  • Looking back I should not have anticipated my presentation.
  • If I had kept the right day with the necessary time, I would have been approved.
  • Despite this moment, I feel very comfortable speaking in public and I really believe that my message sounds like me, because I have been able to express myself better as a result of good reading.
  • In addition, I consider my most important characteristic to be a dissatisfied person.
  • And if I had to choose words to be remembered they would be: ambitious, confident, and happy perhaps because they are the words I remember when I think about successful people.

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    • Nowadays it is extremely important to know how to express yourself well, to organize your ideas, to demonstrate knowledge, to express points of view and to show your personality, as they are very important factors in achieving any goals in our lives.
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    • But every time you search for public speaking, it is easy to find reports of fear, insecurity and other feelings when speaking in public.
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    • Such problems have been suffered by all sorts of people; even the most experienced speakers have felt butterflies in their stomachs before the presentations, perhaps fearing that the lecture would not reach the audience effectively.
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    • So it is extremely important that they have a plan, a good selection of words, a good body language, an appropriate tone of voice and a lot of practice because these are determining factors for a good presentation.
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    • Talking about Tony Robbiens who I had chosen previously to consider the best public speaker, not only because if he had not written his books I wouldn’t have created the routine of reading ,but also by the ability that I have been learning from him of word selection.
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    • Despite this moment, I feel very comfortable speaking in public and I really believe that my message sounds like me, because I have been able to express myself better as a result of good reading.
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    • And if I had to choose words to be remembered they would be: ambitious, confident, and happy perhaps because they are the words I remember when I think about successful people.
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