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    • Strong woman

    • Hana is a young woman , her heart full of Faith.
    • Her hard work is her identity .
    • She work for cosmetic company she promote for hair products mostly hair dyes and an additional skin care product .
    • She use a different technique to promote her products.
    • She use the computer to illustrate the products and monitor her participate reactions.
    • Hana put all her concretion on the work.
    • The company nomine her as the best employee.
    • And collect her between Dozens of employee at the company.
    • And she deserve to be the best employee.

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