添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

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    • My daily life is a bit busy, but I try to spend more time for me on weekends.
    • If It's only a business trip for a few day, it would be better to take a look around Seoul's main attractions.
    • But, Seoul is always crowded.
    • I send some pages that have a good collection of key information for a short trip.
    • It would be nice to travel around here preferentially.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English