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Text from Linh_Scorpio - English

    • The feeling when I know my result of the final exam

    • Hello everybody, I'm Linh and I come from Vietnam.
    • I'm 22 years old and now I prepare to graduate the university.
    • I had a final exam at 2 weeks ago and i knew the score of the final exam at 3 days ago.
    • I get two 9 point for two subject (score standar is 10 point), I was suprise and happy when i know my result via my friend.
    • She sent me a message for notice to me, the first i dont beleive about what her say in messenger, so i ask her: "are you kidding me?" - she said: "let you check your result in the website of school"- immediately, i check it...wow, that's is great and i very very happiness when i saw my score...two 9 point..and i range the first in my class..., i think i dreamming, the score is my dream.
    • Suprise and happy are two feelings when i know my result.
    • After that, i notify to my mother and my younger sister, i have a strong jumps every where in my home.. that's the wonderful time, and now when i writting about that with you, i also feel happy and wanna jump again hehehe

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    • I get two 9 point for two subject (score standar is 10 point), I was suprise and happy when i know my result via my friend.
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    • I geot two 9 pointnines for two of my subjects (score standar is 10 pointthe maximum score is 10), I was suprised and happy when i knowfound out my result via my friend.
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    • She sent me a message for notice to me, the first i dont beleive about what her say in messenger, so i ask her: "are you kidding me?" - she said: "let you check your result in the website of school"- immediately, i check it...wow, that's is great and i very very happiness when i saw my score...two 9 point..and i range the first in my class..., i think i dreamming, the score is my dream.
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    • She sent me a message for notice to me, the. At first iI donidn't beleieve about what sher sayid in her messenager, so i asked her: "are you kidding me?" - she said: "let you check your result ion the website of school"- immediately,school website"- i checked it...wow, t straight away. Wow! I thought. That's is great, and i was very very happinessy when i saw my score...two 9 points/9s..and i range theked first in my class..., i think i am dreamming, the score is my dream.
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    • After that, i notify to my mother and my younger sister, i have a strong jumps every where in my home.. that's the wonderful time, and now when i writting about that with you, i also feel happy and wanna jump again hehehe
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    • After that, i notify told my mother and my younger sister, i have a strong jumps every where in my home.. that's thebeen jumping up and down at home! [not certain what you mean - this is my guess!]. It's been a wonderful time, and now when i writting to you about that with you, i alsois, i feel happy and wanna jump again hehehe¶
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    • After that, i notify told my mother and my younger sister,. i have a strong jumps every where in my home.. that's thebeen jumping up and down at home with joy! It's been a wonderful time, and now when i writtinge about that withit to you, i also feel happy and wanna jump again hehehe¶
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