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  • Dear Mr Kumar, I am writing to apply for the vacancy on the IT Team of Mediation Masters Inc.
    • Currently in my last year of engineering school specialized in Digital Science and Technologies, I am looking for a job in my field of study.
    • What has motivated me to apply to this position is my strong interest for IT development, and the strong company’s intercultural communication.
    • For the past year, during my internship at ECEX, I have been responsible for the automation of processes in the research department where I have learnt how a company could answer to specific needs with IT solutions.
    • Moreover, thanks to several projects with companies, I am able to analyse a context, an exact need and to propose concrete and strong solutions.
  • Indeed, through the last three years, I have worked successfully with Airbus which gave me the sense of the business and a certain diplomacy.
    • As you could see, I am hard working and I enjoy build IT solutions which serve the human well-being.
  • Earlier this year, my school’s engineering department recognized me as the top junior engineering student, which is also a reflection on my leadership, project, and teamwork skills.
  • I am convinced that these traits are essentials in your department and make a noticeable contribution to Mediations Masters Inc.
  • Therefore, I truly believe I would make an excellent addition to your team.
  • Thank you for reviewing my background in consideration for the job opportunity.
    • I am available to meet with you to discuss my application in more detail in an interview.
  • I look forward to hearing from you.
  • Yours faithfully, E. Smith

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    • Currently in my last year of engineering school specialized in Digital Science and Technologies, I am looking for a job in my field of study.
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    • Currently, I am in my last year of engineering school specialized in Digital Science and Technologies,. I am looking for a job in my field of study.
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    • What has motivated me to apply to this position is my strong interest for IT development, and the strong company’s intercultural communication.
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    • What has motivated me to apply to this position is my strong interest for IT development, and the strong company’s intercultural communication.
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    • For the past year, during my internship at ECEX, I have been responsible for the automation of processes in the research department where I have learnt how a company could answer to specific needs with IT solutions.
      투표하세요!
    • For the past year, during my internship at ECEX, I have been responsible for the automation of processes in the research department where I have learnted how a company could answer to specific needs with IT solutions.
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    • Moreover, thanks to several projects with companies, I am able to analyse a context, an exact need and to propose concrete and strong solutions.
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    • Moreover, thanks to several projects with companies,. I am able to analyse a context, an exact need and to propose concrete and strong solutions.
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    • Indeed, through the last three years, I have worked successfully with Airbus which gave me the sense of the business and a certain diplomacy.
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    • Earlier this year, my school’s engineering department recognized me as the top junior engineering student, which is also a reflection on my leadership, project, and teamwork skills.
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    • I am convinced that these traits are essentials in your department and make a noticeable contribution to Mediations Masters Inc.
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