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    • lost girl

    • i find myself in a big hole .it makes me another person with another ethics i was succeful girl;ethical and responsible;beside i choked for my new personality which is a very bad person whith an horrible comportement ......i am loser

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    • i find myself in a big hole .it makes me another person with another ethics i was succeful girl;ethical and responsible;beside i choked for my new personality which is a very bad person whith an horrible comportement ......i am loser
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    • iI find myself in a big hole .it makes me. It turns me into another person with another ethics¶
      i      bad morals.¶
      I       was a successful girl;e. Ethical and responsible;beside i. I also choked for on my new personality which is a very bad person whith an horrible comportementbehaviour.
      ......      iI am a loser
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