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  • Stonehenge

  • In the reading, two people propose that the Celtic Culture in England built the Stonehenge structure, but the listening casts doubt on the reading passages about the origin of this building.
  • The reading mentions that John Aubrey proposed the Druids (people that belonged to Celtic culture) used this scenario for religious ceremonies, and Dr. William Stukely supported the idea and wrote a book about the cultural traditions that were made there, like worship and religious ceremonies.
  • Then in the listening, the professor explains why Druids were not the builders of Stonehenge, basically, because the time of establishment of Druids in England did not match with the radio studies of the stone used for building.
  • So, it was impossible that they used the structure for religious ceremonies.
  • In conclusion, the listening casts doubt on the reading because the Druid did not live in England while the Stonehenge structure was built.

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  • Sentence 1
    • In the reading, two people propose that the Celtic Culture in England built the Stonehenge structure, but the listening casts doubt on the reading passages about the origin of this building.
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  • Sentence 2
    • The reading mentions that John Aubrey proposed the Druids (people that belonged to Celtic culture) used this scenario for religious ceremonies, and Dr. William Stukely supported the idea and wrote a book about the cultural traditions that were made there, like worship and religious ceremonies.
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  • Sentence 3
    • Then in the listening, the professor explains why Druids were not the builders of Stonehenge, basically, because the time of establishment of Druids in England did not match with the radio studies of the stone used for building.
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  • Sentence 5
    • In conclusion, the listening casts doubt on the reading because the Druid did not live in England while the Stonehenge structure was built.
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