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  • About "Louise" by S.Maugham

  • The main character really surprised me.
    • That on the one hand she really was "the most selfish and monstrous woman", because she did not care about the people around her.
    • She manipulated them in her own way, pulled the strings like a puppeteer, and people did not understand it, they did everything as Louise wanted.
  • She didn't care not only for the feelings of friends and acquaintances, but also the feelings of family and love of her people.
    • However, on the other hand, she had an amazing willpower and steadfastness of character.
  • For twenty-five years she was able to pretend to be dying.
    • In my opinion, this is too long and not everyone can stand it.
    • Perhaps, the author was the only man, who understood intentions Louise.
  • If there were more of these people, her plan would probably have failed.
    • I think Louise didn't love her husbands, she didn't love her daughter.
    • Otherwise, she would not have continued to play this performance.
    • If she had stopped, perhaps her first husband would be alive, and her daughter would not have become a nurse for the "sick" mother.
    • I think Louise died on iris's wedding day to punish her daughter.
    • After all, iris, in her opinion, was to stay with her, care about her.
  • I think that this act Louise wanted to forever overshadow her holiday

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