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  • Cover letter

    • To whom it may concern, I am writing to enquire whether there is any vacancies in your company as a fashion designer.
    • I enclose my CV for your information.
  • As you can see, I have been designing for Versace Woman Knitwear department for the last five years.
  • Nowadays, I am deeply committed to Versace and all company affairs.
  • Nevertheless, I feel the necessity to improve and promote.
    • That is why I have considered your company as a new level on my career.
    • I have extensive work experience in the retail sector and luxury brands, something which has given me varied skills and the ability to work with many different kinds of people.
  • I believe I could easily fit into your team.
  • I am a conscientious person who works hard and pays attention to everything in detail.
    • I am flexible, quick to pick up new skills and eager to learn from others.
  • After having been at Versace for the last five years, I am profoundly skilled at knitwear, even though it would be stimulating to try another departmentI am keen to work for a company with a great reputation and high profile like Ganni.
  • As a highly-motivated and results orientated fashion designer within the retail sector, I have a proven track record of improving sales and innovation on new materials and qualities in order to constantly offer the customer novelty and trends.
  • I have excellent references and would be delighted to discuss any possible vacancy with you at your convenience.
    • In case you do not have any suitable openings at the moment, I would be grateful if you would keep my CV on file for any future possibilities.
  • Yours sincerely.

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