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    • I am writing to apply for a work as ux design intern which is offered by the XYZ I have found out about this scholarship from the website of Pracuj.pl I am a twenty-one–years-old student of Dolnośląska Szkoła Wyższa in the specjalizations animation 3D and post production for games and films, where in addition I had lectures and praciteses of UX.
    • I would like to begin intern in your company because I have been interested in UX Design and would like to further this interest by working with proffesional designers in the Uxer Experience whose give me substantial and wide knowledge in these proffesion.
    • In addition, I would like to get to know mentality, behaviors and requirement custumers but the only experience I have is through the Internet, lectures on my University.
    • Thanks for it I will conect my passion to artistic design and working with people.
    • Which is also partly related to my interest in psychology.
    • Now Im study of Dolnośląska Szkoła Wyższa in the specjalizations animation 3D and post production for games and films.
    • Additionaly I was a student at Alexander Tasman’s Comprehensive Music School 1st Level in Kępno.
    • There I studied for six years playing the piano and exploring the arts, music and the history of music.
    • I’m now a Music School graduate.
    • I believe, that I am the best candidate for this intern because I am a hardworking, reliable, and an open-minded person with big potential for your future employee.
    • I hope that my application will be considered positively.
    • I look forward to hear from you.
    • Yours faithfully

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    • I am writing to apply for a work as ux design intern which is offered by the XYZ I have found out about this scholarship from the website of Pracuj.pl I am a twenty-one–years-old student of Dolnośląska Szkoła Wyższa in the specjalizations animation 3D and post production for games and films, where in addition I had lectures and praciteses of UX.
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    • I am writing to apply for a work as ux dfor the position of the UX Design internship which is being offered by the XYZ I havecompany. I found out about this scholarship from the website of Pracuj.pl I am a twenty-one–Pracuj.pl website. I am 21 years- old and a student ofat the Dolnośląska Szkoła Wyższa in the, where I am specjializationsing in 3D animation 3D and post production for games and films, where in addition I had lectures and praciteas well as attend lectures regarding the uses of UX.
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    • I would like to begin intern in your company because I have been interested in UX Design and would like to further this interest by working with proffesional designers in the Uxer Experience whose give me substantial and wide knowledge in these proffesion.
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    • I would like to begin intern in your company becauseam applying for an internship position in UX Design. I have ba keen interested in UX Design and would like to further this interest by working with proffesional designers in the Uxer Experience whose give me substantial and wide knowledge in these proffesion.improve my level of expertise and experience in this area by working with and learning from "UX professionals" employed in this field.
    • ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 2ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 2
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    • In addition, I would like to get to know mentality, behaviors and requirement custumers but the only experience I have is through the Internet, lectures on my University.
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    • In addition, I would also like to get to know mentality, behaviors and requirement custumers butain experience in working with clients, to become familiar with their requirements and expectations, as to date the only experiences I have is through've had have been via the Iinternet, or while attending lectures onat my Uuniversity.
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    • Now Im study of Dolnośląska Szkoła Wyższa in the specjalizations animation 3D and post production for games and films.
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    • Now Im study of Dolnośląska Szkoła Wyższa in the specjalizations animation 3D and post production for games and films.(this statement is redundant -- you've alrady included it in your first sentence -- ie #1)
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    • There I studied for six years playing the piano and exploring the arts, music and the history of music.
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    • There I studied Tasman’s Comprehensive Music School for six years play, concentrating on the piano and exploring the arts, music and the history of musics my main instrument, but also taking courses in musicology and music history.
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    • I believe, that I am the best candidate for this intern because I am a hardworking, reliable, and an open-minded person with big potential for your future employee.
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    • I believe, that I am the bestam a well-qualified candidate for thise intern because I am a hardworking, reliable, and an open-minded person with bigship as I am diligent, reliable, and imaginative, all traits which would be of benefit to your organization as an intern and, potential for yourly, as a future employee.
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