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  • Describe the date of its image

  • the scene that dominating the picture scene of the two men when fit each other, that scene appeared all of the people look at their men regardless of what is happening around them, also this scene it shows the social status of both of them the men another right side on the picture appears in the injustice and wealth image and the second man it shows that he is the poor, thin, oppressed man in that time.
  • It appears by the size of them in addition to comparing the tools which used by each other.when we compare the tools of them we find that

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    • the scene that dominating the picture scene of the two men when fit each other, that scene appeared all of the people look at their men regardless of what is happening around them, also this scene it shows the social status of both of them the men another right side on the picture appears in the injustice and wealth image and the second man it shows that he is the poor, thin, oppressed man in that time.
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    • It appears by the size of them in addition to comparing the tools which used by each other.when we compare the tools of them we find that
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