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  • My presentation

    • Hi, I’m a Chinese girl and I have been in France since 2005.
  • I have worked in Atos Worldline since September 2012.
    • After I finished my master study in computer science in an engineer school (Polytech’Tours), and another master study in Company Administration (IAE de Tours) in 2009, I found a job in a banking software company (Delta-Informatique, a Sopra Group Company).
    • There I worked as a developer.
  • Our product is called “Delta-Bank”, which is one of the top 5 banking solutions in the world, used in about 47 countries.
  • I have helped develop several clearing systems (SEPA, Swift, FINA, etc.).
  • At the same time, I wrote technical specifications and performed tests.
    • I’ve also gone to Croatia to manage integration and tests.
  • Now I’m a business analyst for “Sips” Solution, an online payment solution, in the BFI business unit in Atos Worldline.
    • When I worked on Delta-Bank project, I made contract between issuer and acquirer.
    • And now working on Sips solution, I provide a solution between accepter and acquirer.
    • The card management and payment sector interests me a lot.

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