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  • graph description

  • The graph provides information about the changing of access to modern technology at home in the UK between 1994 and 2008.
    • We can see four household devices has increased gradually from year to year.
  • In 1994 about 48 per cent of homes had a CD players.
    • After it had a slight rise to 90 per cent in 2008.
  • And then CD players leveled off.
  • The number of mobile phone was less than 20 per cent in 1996 into the houses.
  • It also went up with some fluctuation and reached approximately 80 per cent.
  • Likewise, Internet connection was upwards from around 10 per cent in 1998 to just over 60 per cent in 2008.
    • No figures are given for households with DVD player before 2002.
  • But the percentage rose wildly from around 30 per cent at this time to about 80 per cent in 2004.
    • It then continued to climb but more steady

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