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Text from blackgamersss111 - English

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    • Hello this is Reza from I.R.I truly in my country Video games don't have very good importance.
  • But I can say my country's gamers are professional at gaming, and online games but our problem is our society, In the culture of our society There's nothing named by "Video Game" and I can say it has the lowest Importance from our parent's point of view.
    • My favorite hobby is playing video game but because of my country's situation I can't play online in my PS4 but I read about game's plot and Gameplay I watch their Walk through in the youtube.
    • this industry is small, so small in my country. because their brain is old.
  • Rockstar games is one of the best or I can say the best video game developer in the world. this studio released and created the many worthy games like GTA series RDR series Bulley ,...
  • I wanna play these I enjoy from reading and studying but If I get some free time I wanna to spend it with playing video games.
  • This isn't my fault, I didn't choose to be Iranian and U.S.A is not my enemy many state men in iran have educated in U.S Why I should say Death to America when my clothes are from america!
  • Why I should say it because my state men have educated in U.S Why I should say it because ny favorite game has made in U.S Totally peace is good

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    • But I can say my country's gamers are professional at gaming, and online games but our problem is our society, In the culture of our society There's nothing named by "Video Game" and I can say it has the lowest Importance from our parent's point of view.
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    • My favorite hobby is playing video game but because of my country's situation I can't play online in my PS4 but I read about game's plot and Gameplay I watch their Walk through in the youtube.
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    • My favorite hobby is playing video game buts because of my country's situation I can't play online in my PS4 but I read about game's plot and Gameplay I watch theirm Walk through in the youtube.
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    • Rockstar games is one of the best or I can say the best video game developer in the world. this studio released and created the many worthy games like GTA series RDR series Bulley ,...
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    • This isn't my fault, I didn't choose to be Iranian and U.S.A is not my enemy many state men in iran have educated in U.S Why I should say Death to America when my clothes are from america!
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    • Why I should say it because my state men have educated in U.S Why I should say it because ny favorite game has made in U.S Totally peace is good
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