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  • June 19th.

    • Today is Wednesday June 19th.
  • Today I went to school, I took mathematics class, political class, and arts class.
    • Everybody know that I like the soccer.
    • This afternoon will be playing Italy against Japan, While I was painting a landscape on arts class, Javier come and said to me: "I bet you that will win Japan", he said that because I'm quite fan of italy, my grandmother was Italian.
    • Then we did a deal, but now after to watched the match, I know that Italy won 4-3, and he must give me a marshmallow covered of chocolat, I'll share with my girl.
    • My build my brige that I did with only paper, The homework was hold up a differents rocks for a time.
    • The brige hold up the first and second rock, bur the last the third rock threw down my brige.

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    • This afternoon will be playing Italy against Japan, While I was painting a landscape on arts class, Javier come and said to me: "I bet you that will win Japan", he said that because I'm quite fan of italy, my grandmother was Italian.
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    • This afternoon Italy will be playing Italy against Japan,. While I was painting a landscape oin arts class,. Javier coame and said to me: "I bet you that Japan will win Japan", he said that because I'm quite a fan of iItaly, my grandmother was Italian.
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    • Then we did a deal, but now after to watched the match, I know that Italy won 4-3, and he must give me a marshmallow covered of chocolat, I'll share with my girl.
      투표하세요!
    • Then we didmade a deal, but now after towe watched the match, I know that Italy won 4-3, and he must give me a marshmallow covered ofwith chocolat, I'll share with my girl.
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