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    • "I am fallen down for 300m and I am unharmed"

    • Simply he has made the wrong choice, but it is like all the angels’ paradise would have decided to help him without a reason.
    • He has placed his foot in a wrong way and he has fallen for three hundred metres, a height like twice and a half of the London Eye and like the Eiffel Tower, even if we consider the antenna.
    • He has bumped against lots of stone corners, he has reversed himself like a ship overwhelmed by waves and he has left blood spots on ice.
    • When he is stopped, he had not more breath, only the mouth full of ground.
    • He has scream: “I’m alive.” Then he has got up and he has cleaned his knees, like they would have done no more than a trip during a children game.
    • It has become just a miracle instead.
    • Seated on a leather armchair in a Glasgow Hospital, Adam Potter, 36 years old, has like a boxer’s face after fifteen rounds finished in a badly way.

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    • Simply he has made the wrong choice, but it is like all the angels’ paradise would have decided to help him without a reason.
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    • Simply he has made the wrong choice, but it is like all the angels’ paradise's angels would have decided to help him without a reason.
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  • Sentence 2
    • He has placed his foot in a wrong way and he has fallen for three hundred metres, a height like twice and a half of the London Eye and like the Eiffel Tower, even if we consider the antenna.
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    • He has placed his foot in a wrong way and he has fallen for three hundred metres, a height like twice and a half of the London Eye and like the Eiffel Tower, even if we consider also the antenna.
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    • He has placed his foot in a wrong way and he has fallen forcorrectly and fell three hundred metres, athe height like twiceof two and a half of the London Eyes and like the Eiffel Tower, even if we considerincluding the antenna.
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    • He has bumped against lots of stone corners, he has reversed himself like a ship overwhelmed by waves and he has left blood spots on ice.
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    • He has bumped against lots of stone corners, he has reversed himselfedges, turned upside down like a ship overwhelmed by waves and he has left blood spots onon the ice.
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    • He has bumped against a lots of stone corners, he has reversed himselftumbled like a ship overwhelmed by waves and he has left blood spots on ice.
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    • He has scream: “I’m alive.” Then he has got up and he has cleaned his knees, like they would have done no more than a trip during a children game.
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    • He has screamed: “I’m alive.” Then he has got up and he has cleaned his knees, like they would have done no more than a trip during a children game.
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    • He has scream:ed “I’m alive.” Then he has got up and he has cleaned his knees, like they would have done had it been no more than a trip during a children's game.
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    • He has scream:ed, “I’m alive.!” Then he has got up and he has cleaned off his knees, like they would have doneas if his fall had been no more than a trip during a children's game.
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    • Seated on a leather armchair in a Glasgow Hospital, Adam Potter, 36 years old, has like a boxer’s face after fifteen rounds finished in a badly way.
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    • Seated on a leather armchair in a Glasgow Hospital, Adam Potter, 36 years old, has like a boxer’s face after fifteen rounds finished in a badly way. ¶
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    • Seated on a leather armchair in a Glasgow Hospital, Adam Potter, 36 years old, has a face like a boxer’s face after fifteen rounds finished in a badly way.
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