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Introduce a class friend
- He is name Murat who is sit right next to me in class.
- He is a teach of fine arts.
- He is look like serious but He didn't kill in the child yourself He is have a glasses He is have short hair.
- He is as bellied as me

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Sentence 1
- He is name Murat who is sit right next to me in class.
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- He is name is Murat ~~who is~~, he sits right next to me in class.
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- He is a teach of fine arts.
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- He is a teacher of fine arts.
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- He ~~is a teach of f~~teaches Fine aArts.
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- He is look like serious but He didn't kill in the child yourself He is have a glasses He is have short hair.
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- He is look like serious but He didn't kill in the child yourself. He is have a glasses He is have short hair.
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- He is looks like serious but He didn't kill in the child ~~your~~in himself He ~~is have a~~has glasses He ~~is have~~has short hair.
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- He is look ~~like~~s serious but Hhe ~~did~~hasn't ~~kill in~~lost the child ~~yourself He is have a~~in him. He wears glasses. He is haves short hair.
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- He is as bellied as me
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- He ihas as bell~~ied as~~y like me.
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