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Text from Ecem1729 - English

  • A Friend of Mine Part 2

  • This is the second part of my story.
    • I realized that she changed when she helped me.
    • It was like she just died and born as a new person.
    • She sat down near me and asked me how i feel.
    • I said, "i'm okay" but then i started to tell.
    • Our conversation has begun.It was really enjoyable to talking with her.
    • She told me about her life.I saw the real personality behind the mask when she told me.
    • When we were talking at the park.Suddenly it started to rain.
    • She said "hurry up, we should go home now".
    • We have begun to run , i said "steady on !. you're running so fast." The only thing that i want was going to home as soon as possible.
    • Then we were at home, we drunk some tea and ate cookies.
    • Now i love her so much, she is one of the best friends of mine.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English