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    • introduce myself

    • It’s really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview.
    • Now I will introduce myself briefly.
    • I’m studying in Dianji university.
    • My major is international logistics.
    • When I was a freshman, I devote myself in student union, and used to be a secretary of publicity.
    • And in there I not only learned how to make out a post, but also cultivate the ability of organization and coordination, have learned how to contract with every kind of people which I think the basic quality that each freight forwarder should have, and then I spend most rest of time on study ,I have already pasted CET 4&6, I also have acquired basic knowledge of my major during my school time.
    • Last year, I was worked as intern in Maohong international transportation Co. Ltd.
    • I have simply learned a set of export manifest . even so, I still have a lot of things to learn, and Dbschenker is a global company ,so I feel I can gain the most from working in this kind of company environment.
    • That’s the reason why I come here to complete for this position.
    • I think I’m a good team worker and a person of great honesty to others.
    • Also I’m able to work under great pressure. That’s all.
    • Thank you for give me a chance!

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    • When I was a freshman, I devote myself in student union, and used to be a secretary of publicity.
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    • When I was a freshman, I devoted myself into student union, and used to be awhere I was the secretary of publicity.
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    • When I was a freshman, I devote myself in sI devoted myself as a freshman to the Student uUnion, and used to be a srved as the Secretary of pPublicity.
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    • When I was a freshman, I devoted myself into the student union, and used to be a swas to the Secretary of pPublicity.
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    • And in there I not only learned how to make out a post, but also cultivate the ability of organization and coordination, have learned how to contract with every kind of people which I think the basic quality that each freight forwarder should have, and then I spend most rest of time on study ,I have already pasted CET 4&6, I also have acquired basic knowledge of my major during my school time.
      투표하세요!
    • And in there I not only learned how to make out a post, but also cultivate the abilityI learned there to do mailings, cultivate skills of organization and co-ordination, have learned how and to cointeract with everyall kinds of people, an asset which I think the basic quality that each freight forwarder should have, and thenis essential for freight forwarders. I spendt most of the rest of my time on studying; ,I have already pasted CET 4&6, I also havepasted (posted?) already CET 4&6 and acquired basic knowledge of my major during my school time.
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    • I have simply learned a set of export manifest . even so, I still have a lot of things to learn, and Dbschenker is a global company ,so I feel I can gain the most from working in this kind of company environment.
      투표하세요!
    • I have simply learned a set of export manifest . even so, I still have a lot of things to learn, andyet a lot to learn, in spite of the fact that I have mastered the art of making out export manifests, but since Dbschenker is a global company ,so, I feel that I can gain the most from workingbenefit from continuing to work in this kind of company environment.
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    • I think I’m a good team worker and a person of great honesty to others.
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    • I think I’believe that I am a good team worker and, a person of great honesty to othersintegrity, and capable of working well under pressure.
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