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  • A Friend

    • I just want to tell you about a friend of mine , and want to see if my writing is right at the same time.Please correct my faults.
    • She's name is Mei.I met her before 3-4 years.At the first, we didn't like each other at all.I hated her because she was always talking about how much is her appearance is attractive, and how many boys fell in love with her.That was the only subject that she can talk about.I accept that she was very good looking but it doesn't mean she must talk about it everytime.
    • I met with her through a very close friend of mine.I was at a cafe with my close friend, and suddenly Mei just showed up.Then just like i said,I couldn't stand her chat and said "i'm in a hurry, i have to go home!".And leave them there.
    • One day , someone stabbed me in my back.And Mei was the only person who helped me.I'm going to tell about that later.

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  • cümle 1
    • I just want to tell you about a friend of mine , and want to see if my writing is right at the same time.Please correct my faults.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • I just want to tell you about a friend of mine , and want to see if my writing is right at the same time.Please correct my faultmistakes.
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 1YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 1
  • cümle 2
    • She's name is Mei.I met her before 3-4 years.At the first, we didn't like each other at all.I hated her because she was always talking about how much is her appearance is attractive, and how many boys fell in love with her.That was the only subject that she can talk about.I accept that she was very good looking but it doesn't mean she must talk about it everytime.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • She'sHer name is Mei.I met her before 3-4 years. ago. At the first, we didn't like each other at all.I hated her because she was always talking about how much ishow attractive her appearance iwas attractive, and how many boys fellhad fallen in love with her.That was the only subject that she canould talk about. I accepted that she was very good -looking but it doesidn't mean she musthad to talk about it everytime.
      BulkaCatBulkaCat profile picture Yorumlar
      50% GOOD (2 votes)
    • She'sHer name is Mei. I met her before 3-4 years.At the ago. At first, we didn't like each other at all. I hated her because she was always talking about how much is her appearance is attractive she is, and how many boys fell in love with her. That was the only subject that she canould talk about. I accept that she was very good looking, but ithat doesn't mean she must talk about it everyall of the time.
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 2YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 2
  • cümle 3
    • I met with her through a very close friend of mine.I was at a cafe with my close friend, and suddenly Mei just showed up.Then just like i said,I couldn't stand her chat and said "i'm in a hurry, i have to go home!".And leave them there.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • I met with her through a very close friend of mine.I was at a cafe with my close friend, and suddenly Mei just showed up.Then just like i said,I couldn't stand her chat and said "iI'm in a hurry, iI have to go home!". And leaveft them there.
      BulkaCatBulkaCat profile picture Yorumlar
      50% GOOD (2 votes)
    • I met with her through a very close friend of mine. I was at a cafe with my close friend, and suddenly Mei just showed up.Then just l Like iI said, before, I couldn't stand her chat and, so I said "iI'm in a hurry, iI have to go home!".And leave Then I left them there.
      Pajal7Pajal7 profile picture Yorumlar
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
  • cümle 4
    • One day , someone stabbed me in my back.And Mei was the only person who helped me.I'm going to tell about that later.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • One day , someone stabbed me in my back.And Mei was the only person who helped me. I'm going to tell you about that later. ¶
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      0% GOOD (1 votes)
    • One day , sSomeone backstabbed me in my back.And. Mei was the only person who helped me.I'm going to tell shall talk about that later. ¶
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      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4