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Text from victor_dia - English

  • My journal 2

    • Hi everyone, I has been practicing English, I feel that imporoving , perhaps i should practice more my pronunciation, but I love to sing songs in English ,Honestly I think that it's help me.
    • Learn a new languages close me to my mother tongue.
    • It's fascinant .
    • I hope am increasingly correct in this language.
    • Perhaps when the compleition of my vacations come I can't practice as much as now.
  • But I don't give up--

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English