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  • I'm a selling

  • Yes I'm a selling , currently I'm selling desserts around my neighborhood and over the city town and at the university .
  • I decided to sell desserts because they leave a lot of money and are easy to prepare however the only inconvenients are that I am a shy guy and I feel shy to offer my desserts and the another inconvenient is that I don't have a fridge so I have to borrow one to my neighbors.
  • So those inconvenients doesen't metter to me, I am going to cointinue selling because I need money to travel to USA.

VÆR SÅ SNILL, HJELP TIL MED Å RETTE HVER SETNING! - English

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    • I decided to sell desserts because they leave a lot of money and are easy to prepare however the only inconvenients are that I am a shy guy and I feel shy to offer my desserts and the another inconvenient is that I don't have a fridge so I have to borrow one to my neighbors.
      Stem nå!
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