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    • Teenager's problems

    • It is hard to understand for parents how important for their kids some things such as misunderstanding of teachers or difficulties with communication to their classmates, first unhappy love or the fact they are hates their appearance or body.
    • Sometimes the only thing children need is a talk to mom or dad, just to share their emotions and get a little support.
    • Because parents always busy with their work, so when they get home they are tired and try to avoid any complaints from kids.
    • It's easy to have a little friendly talk with a son or a daughter, have a nice walk somewhere at the park or coffee shop.
    • If parents won't to talk with children, they can close themselves, feel lonely and fall in depression.
    • They will try to find teenagers with similar problems and finally get under bad influence and start to drink alcohol or maybe even using drugs to make them feel happy.
    • Kids will be protesting and start to shock not only their families, but a whole society around.
    • Then adults will consider that teenagers nowadays are rude, lazy, stupid and ill-behaved.
    • Elder people usually compare their childhood days and youth with present, and say that nowadays everything is worse, specially our young people.
    • Generally, people are said to become wiser with age.
    • But not always it is true.
    • Some people become wiser with years, others are just getting older.
  • We can meet a wise man among the old as often as among the young.
    • It is wrong that wisdom always comes in old age.
    • Sometimes parents don't allow to their children to choose the area they wish to study in.
    • They think it will not lead their daughter or son to success or that profession is not proper for living.
    • They declared their children as too young to decide those main things as their future profession.
    • "No, you won't be an artist, only under my dead body.
    • You need to be a lawyer, because they are paid well."

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    • It is hard to understand for parents how important for their kids some things such as misunderstanding of teachers or difficulties with communication to their classmates, first unhappy love or the fact they are hates their appearance or body.
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    • It is hard for parents to understand for parents how important for their kids some things such assome things are for their children. For example, having misunderstanding ofs with their teachers or, having difficulties with communication tong with their classmates, first unhappy loveexperiencing their first heart break or the fact they areat they hates their appearance or body.
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    • Sometimes the only thing children need is a talk to mom or dad, just to share their emotions and get a little support.
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    • Sometimes the only thing these children need is ato talk to mom or dad, just to share their emotions and get a little support.
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    • Because parents always busy with their work, so when they get home they are tired and try to avoid any complaints from kids.
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    • BecausSince the parents are always busy with theirat work, so when they get home they are tired and try to avoid any complaints from kidstheir children.
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    • It's easy to have a little friendly talk with a son or a daughter, have a nice walk somewhere at the park or coffee shop.
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    • It's easygood to have a little friendly talkchat with ayour son or a daughter, have a nice walk somewhere atin the park or go to a coffee shop.
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    • If parents won't to talk with children, they can close themselves, feel lonely and fall in depression.
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    • If parents wdon't tohave these friendly talks with their children, they can closestart keeping to themselves, feel lonely and fall into depression.
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    • They will try to find teenagers with similar problems and finally get under bad influence and start to drink alcohol or maybe even using drugs to make them feel happy.
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    • They will try to find teenagers with similar problems and finally gemight uender bad influence and start up getting influenced to drink alcohol or maybe even usinge drugs just to make them feel happy.
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    • Kids will be protesting and start to shock not only their families, but a whole society around.
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    • KidThis will be protesting and start toa kind of protest by these children and will shock not only their families, but athe whole society around.
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    • Then adults will consider that teenagers nowadays are rude, lazy, stupid and ill-behaved.
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    • Then, the adults will considerthink that teenagers nowadays are rude, lazy, stupid and ill-behavmannered.
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    • Elder people usually compare their childhood days and youth with present, and say that nowadays everything is worse, specially our young people.
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    • Elder peopleThe older generation usually compare their childhood days and youth with the present, and say that nowadays everything is worse, especially ourthe young people.
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    • They think it will not lead their daughter or son to success or that profession is not proper for living.
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    • They think it will not lead their daughter or son to success or that the profession is not approper forriate for earning a living.
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    • They declared their children as too young to decide those main things as their future profession.
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    • They declaredconsider their children as too young to decide those main things such as their future profession.
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