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    • I am in the worst moment of my life

    • As the title says I am in the worst moment of my life because in the during of 2 months a lot of things has happened to me.
    • First I lost my job because I was very lazy while I was doing my work so the campany decided to kick me then my girlfriend breaks with me because I used to fight too much then I realize that the college decided to suspend me for one semester because of low grades that's horrible I'm very sad however I going to continue with my life I going to continue fithing and continue dreaming in big and progressing and with my goals and I know that very soon I'm gonna be high as a successful man.

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    • As the title says I am in the worst moment of my life because in the during of 2 months a lot of things has happened to me.
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    • As the title says I am inat the worst moment of my life, because in the during ofthe last 2 months a lot of things hasve happened to me.
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    • As the title says, I am inat the worst momepoint of my life because in the during of 2 months a lot of things hasve happened to me over the last 2 months.
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    • First I lost my job because I was very lazy while I was doing my work so the campany decided to kick me then my girlfriend breaks with me because I used to fight too much then I realize that the college decided to suspend me for one semester because of low grades that's horrible I'm very sad however I going to continue with my life I going to continue fithing and continue dreaming in big and progressing and with my goals and I know that very soon I'm gonna be high as a successful man.
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    • First, I lost my job because I was very lazy, while I was doing my work, so the campany decided to kick me tfire me. Then my girlfriend breaksoje up with me, because I used to fight too much t. Then I realizefound out that the college decided to suspend me for one semester because of low grades t. That's horrible. I'm very sad h. However, I going to continue with my life I going to continue fithing and con, fightinueg dreaming in big and progressing and with my goals and I know that very soon I'm gonna be high asing to be a successful man.
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