Korekty

Text from gella_rich - English

  • Teens vs adults

  • Generation gap is the problem which existed in all times.
  • Adult's mentality is different from teenager's, because they are the children of two epochs with defferent views on various subjects.
  • Because of this parents and their children argue with each other, sometimes even fight.
  • Most of those quarrels happen because of bad marks at school, non-proper clothes, colors of hair, over-demonstrated behavior of kids: when they back home from the party all drank or smoked, when they choose wrong circle of people to hang out with.
  • So, saying about bad marks at school, I would assume that this little negative thing can turn to the biggest problems with communication between parents and their kids.
  • Every parent wants to see ideal educated child with good behavior and well manners, but children are just learning, they are in process of knowing life, so it is normally to be mistaken sometimes.
  • Children have different characters, ability to understand subjects, even those who are talented shouldn't be first and perfect always and in everything.
  • Adults should understand it.
  • For example, maybe their kid hates chemistry and so, this is the subject he hard to learn, but turn away he can be perfect at math and drawing, or his passing is reading or writing.
  • Parents need to help their kids to keep theirs head above water.
  • Because they have difficulties in process of the growing and studying, so sometimes those problem which seems are monor for adults, for teenagers are big tragedy.
  • It is hard to understand for parents how important for their kids some things such as misunderstanding of teachers or difficulties with communication to their classmates, first unhappy love or the fact they are hates their appearance or body.
  • Sometimes the only thing children need is a talk to mom or dad, just to share their emotions and get a little support.
  • Because parents always busy with their work, so when they get home they are tired and try to avoid any complaints from kids.
  • It's easy to have a little friendly talk with a son or a daughter, have a nice walk somewhere at the park or coffee shop.
  • If parents won't to talk with children, they can close themself, feel lonely and fall in depression.
  • They will try to find teenagers with similar problems and finally get under bad influence and start to drink alcohol or maybe even using drugs to make them feel happy.
  • Kids will be protesting and start to shock not only their families, but a whole society around.
  • Then adults will concider that teenagers nowadays are rude, lazy, stupid and ill-behaved.
  • Eldery people usually compare their childhood days and youth with present, and say that nowadays everything is worce, specially our young people.
  • Generally, people are said to become wiser with age.
  • But not always it is true.
  • Some people become wiser with years, others are just getting older.
  • We can meet a wise man among the old as often as among the young.
  • It is wrong that wisdom always comes in old age.
  • Sometimes parents dont allow to their children to choose the area they wish to study in.
  • They think it will not lead their daughter or son to success or that profession is not proper for living.
  • They declared their children as too young to decide those main things as their future profession.
  • "No, you won't be an artist, only under my dead body.
  • You need to be a lawyer, besause they are paid well."

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

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    • Adult's mentality is different from teenager's, because they are the children of two epochs with defferent views on various subjects.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
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    • Most of those quarrels happen because of bad marks at school, non-proper clothes, colors of hair, over-demonstrated behavior of kids: when they back home from the party all drank or smoked, when they choose wrong circle of people to hang out with.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • So, saying about bad marks at school, I would assume that this little negative thing can turn to the biggest problems with communication between parents and their kids.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
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    • Every parent wants to see ideal educated child with good behavior and well manners, but children are just learning, they are in process of knowing life, so it is normally to be mistaken sometimes.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
    • Children have different characters, ability to understand subjects, even those who are talented shouldn't be first and perfect always and in everything.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
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    • For example, maybe their kid hates chemistry and so, this is the subject he hard to learn, but turn away he can be perfect at math and drawing, or his passing is reading or writing.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
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    • Because they have difficulties in process of the growing and studying, so sometimes those problem which seems are monor for adults, for teenagers are big tragedy.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11
  • Zdanie 12
    • It is hard to understand for parents how important for their kids some things such as misunderstanding of teachers or difficulties with communication to their classmates, first unhappy love or the fact they are hates their appearance or body.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12
  • Zdanie 13
    • Sometimes the only thing children need is a talk to mom or dad, just to share their emotions and get a little support.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 13DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 13
  • Zdanie 14
    • Because parents always busy with their work, so when they get home they are tired and try to avoid any complaints from kids.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 14DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 14
  • Zdanie 15
    • It's easy to have a little friendly talk with a son or a daughter, have a nice walk somewhere at the park or coffee shop.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 15DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 15
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    • They will try to find teenagers with similar problems and finally get under bad influence and start to drink alcohol or maybe even using drugs to make them feel happy.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 17DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 17
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  • Zdanie 20
    • Eldery people usually compare their childhood days and youth with present, and say that nowadays everything is worce, specially our young people.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 20DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 20
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