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    • hi dear .my name is maryam .I want learn english .and I can learn persion to you .please answer to me .
    • I have one brother his name is Abbas.his 9 and he is very active for example when he wake up he want to wake all of my family member .I think he is a little crazy .

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    • hi dear .my name is maryam .I want learn english .and I can learn persion to you .please answer to me .
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    • hi dear .my name is mMaryam .I want to learn eEnglish .and I can ltearn pch you Persioan to you .please answer to me .
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    • hHi dear .everyone, my name is mMaryam . I want to learn eEnglish .and, in return, I can ltearn pch you the Persioan to you .please answer to me .language. Please contact me if you are interested.
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    • I have one brother his name is Abbas.his 9 and he is very active for example when he wake up he want to wake all of my family member .I think he is a little crazy .
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    • I have one brother, his name is Abbas.he is 9 and he is very active.
      for example when he wake up he want to wake       up all of my family members .I think he is a little bit crazy .
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    • I have one brother his name is Abbas.his 9 and he is very active¶
      f      , Abbas. He's 9 years old and is very energetic. For example, when he wakes up, he wants to wake up all of my family members. .I think he is a little bit crazy .
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