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- Frogs go through a life cycle that contains five stages.
- The first stage of a frog's life begins with fertilized eggs.
- The eggs are laid in the calm water especially in a pond.
- To our amazement, eggs don't have a hard shell, and they are usually covered with a jellylike substance that acts like a protective coating.
- The size, shape, color and also the jelly substance of the eggs vary in different species.
- After about three weeks, the eggs will hatch and very tiny creatures will appear that are called tadpolet.
- Hatching out of the eggs depend on the kind of frog and water temperature.
- If the water is warmer, they'll come out sooner.
- At this stage, it looks more like a fish than a frog and consists of a tail, mouth and external gills which it breathes through.
- Furthermore, it feeds on plants, algae and the other tadpoles.
- As a tadpole grows, lungs begin to develop so that it will be able to breathe out of the water when it becomes an adult frog.
- In addition, its hind legs mature bit by bit at eight weeks.
- Now it can leap around instead of only swimming.
- In spite of getting the signs of a frog, it still has a very long tail.
- In the next stage, tadpole with the hind legs turn into froglet.
- The froglet continue to grow, and its front legs start to sprout gradually.
- However, its long tail shrinks.
- In this stage, it will be able to leave the water, but it's too small.
- Moreover, its eyes and mouth turns to be larger.
- Finally, the froglet becomes a frog when the tail is completely absorbed by its body, and it commences eating insects instead of plants.
- Also it's ready to inhabit on land.
- Some of the frogs that live in colder climates hibernate through the winter.
- When spring arrives, they will find a mate then lay their eggs in the water and the life cycle will be started again.
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