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    • first watch movie or first reading book?

    • Various point of view which is relevant to the matter being discussed bring us to to the moot question as to whether in order to watch movies before reading books or choose to read books first.
    • Some people prefer the former whereas the other holds precisely the opposite and prefer the latter.
    • I content that it is better to read books next watch movies.
    • The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shade light on a number of issues in this framework.
    • The first focal point that prompts me to hold this idea is that a novel is filled with lots of actions and events, as well as many details of characters, have been depicted in the books and writers have enough time to describe all of characters features however, it is generally impossible to condense these in to a two-hour-long film.
    • Therefore, the film should cut, and directory can not depict all of the actions that have been demonstrated in the books.
    • To take personal experience as an example: last year I read the Harry Potter book, and that was 600 pages.
    • With the attention to the number of pages, the writer had enough time to describe all of scenes and characteristics of characters but this year I watched Harry Potter Movie in the cinema, and it was too short.
    • The director could not depict all of the stories and he had to ignore some events that in my opinion, these events were fascinating.
    • Therefore, it is better to read the book then watch the movie that does not miss such different parts of the story.
    • The second reason coming to mind to support my viewpoint is concerned with this issue is that reading books help audience mind to imagine the characters, but when people watch the movie first and then read a book, it made them just as a consumer rather than plunge them into the story.
    • People should be able to imagine the characters as they want and it is the magic of books But if they watch movies first, it will prevent the mind flourish.
    • Reading books before watching a film not only motivate superior power but also it forces people to be creator whereas watching movies first eliminate creativity.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Frazo 1
    • Various point of view which is relevant to the matter being discussed bring us to to the moot question as to whether in order to watch movies before reading books or choose to read books first.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Various points of view which is relevant to the matter being discussed brings us to to the moot question as tof whether in order to watch movies before reading books or choose to read books first.
    • Various points of view, which isare relevant to the matter being discussed, bring us to to the moot question as tof whether in order towe should watch movies before reading books or choose to read the books first.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shade light on a number of issues in this framework.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shaded light on a number of issues in this framework.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • The first focal point that prompts me to hold this idea is that a novel is filled with lots of actions and events, as well as many details of characters, have been depicted in the books and writers have enough time to describe all of characters features however, it is generally impossible to condense these in to a two-hour-long film.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The first focal point that prompts me to hold this ideaagree with this argument is that, a novel is filled with lots of actions and events, as well as many details of characters, that have been depicted in the books and the writers have enough time to describe all of the characters' features h. However, it is generally impossible to condense these in to a two-hour-long film.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • Therefore, the film should cut, and directory can not depict all of the actions that have been demonstrated in the books.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Therefore, the film should cutcuts out some parts, and the directory can not depict all of the actions that have been demonstrated in the books.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • With the attention to the number of pages, the writer had enough time to describe all of scenes and characteristics of characters but this year I watched Harry Potter Movie in the cinema, and it was too short.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • With the attention toBecause of the number of pages, the writer had enough time to describe all of the scenes and characteristics of the characters, but this year I watched Harry Potter Mthe movie inat the cinema, and it was too short.
    • With the attention to thsuch a large number of pages, the writer had enough time to describe all of the scenes and characteristics of the characters, but this yearwhen I watched Harry Potter Movie in the cinema, and this year, it was too short.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • The director could not depict all of the stories and he had to ignore some events that in my opinion, these events were fascinating.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The director could not depict all of the stories and he had to ignore some events that, in my opinion, these events were fascinating.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • Therefore, it is better to read the book then watch the movie that does not miss such different parts of the story.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Therefore, it is better to read the book then watch the movie that doeso not miss such different parts of the story.
    • Therefore, it is better to read the book, then watch the movie that does not miss such differento avoid missing out on some parts of the story.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
    • The second reason coming to mind to support my viewpoint is concerned with this issue is that reading books help audience mind to imagine the characters, but when people watch the movie first and then read a book, it made them just as a consumer rather than plunge them into the story.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The second reason coming to mindI can think of to support my viewpoint is concerned with this issueof view is that reading books help audiencencourages the mind to imagine the characters, but when people watch the movie first and then read athe book, it made them just as aonly makes them consumers rather than pluallowinge them into imagine the story.
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
    • People should be able to imagine the characters as they want and it is the magic of books But if they watch movies first, it will prevent the mind flourish.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • People should be able to imagine the characters as they want and it is the magic of books. But if they watch movies first, it will prevent their mind to flourish.
    • People should be able to imagine the characters as they want and ithis is the magic ofbeauty of reading books. But if they watch movies first, it willthey prevent their mind from flourishing.
    • People should be able to imagine the characters as they want and i. It is the magic of books But. However, if they watch the movies first, it will preventdoes not allow the mind to flourish.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
  • Frazo 13
    • Reading books before watching a film not only motivate superior power but also it forces people to be creator whereas watching movies first eliminate creativity.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Reading books before watching a film not only motivate superior powers the power of imagination, but also it forces people to be the creator, whereas watching the movies first eliminates creativity.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13