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AIDER A CORRIGER MAINTENANT !Corrigé

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  • TOEFL practice essay

  • Sometimes, being in a relationship requires us to make different small decisions that may have a huge impact.
  • I strongly agree with this statement, because being honest is the best solution in any situation.
  • These are the reasons why I believe that.
  • To begin with, telling the truth keeps your heart light.
    • That is, you do not always have to be scared of concealing something, but conversely, you feel open and free.
  • For example, there was a time when my golden earring broke in half, because it was old and tattered.
    • I was desperate because I did not want to be punished or yelled at.
  • Moreover, repairing the earring could have been expensive.
    • Notwithstanding that, I went directly to my mom and showed her the piece of jewelry.
    • It surprised me how understanding she was, she did not say a bad word, only that it has already a million years and it should not bother me.
    • Therefore, the bond I had with my mother strengthened as she understood that I can be trusted and I did not have to bear a burden.
  • Secondly, being honest helps you gain respect.
    • People value those who do not try to fool them around and forgive them for various incidents.
    • For instance, I’ve read in a book called ‘The girl’s encyclopedia’, which is Russian, that when you are late for a class because of oversleeping and the teacher asks you why , it is a lot better to get this straight and confess your sin.
  • I cerebrated over that and implemented this strategy myself in the 9th grade.
    • The history teacher, which was the one who had to forgive my mistake, was surprisingly kind to me the whole year .What’s more, she trusted me errands like going to other teachers during class and delivering study materials.
    • Thus, it is amazing that truth conditions our place in the society in a positive way.
  • All in all, no matter what I am going through with that person, I will always say what I have to and let the cat out of the bag.
  • This is provides me with a clean conscience , and a good reputation.

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