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July 10th.
- Finally, tomorrow I'm going to meet me again with my mommy, I have been living in Medellin since last 5 years, just in July and December I can visit my family in Bogota, my family is very importan for myself.
- Tomorrow I need go to down town, and buy somethings that my mommy needs.
- I feel so glamd 'cause I need hug my mom.ciao.

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- Finally, tomorrow I'm going to meet me again with my mommy, I have been living in Medellin since last 5 years, just in July and December I can visit my family in Bogota, my family is very importan for myself.
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- Finally, tomorrow I'm going to meet me again with my mommy, I have been living in Medellin since last 5 years, just in July and December I can visit my family in Bogota, my family is very importan for myself.¶
  Tomorrow I'm going to meet with my mother again. I've been living in Medellin for the past five years. Every July and December I get to visit my family in Bogota. My family is very important to me.
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- Finally, tomorrow I'm going to meet ~~me again~~ with my mom~~my,~~. I have been living in Medellin ~~sinc~~for the last 5 years~~, just in July and December~~. I can visit my family in Bogota~~, m~~ just in July and December. My family is very importan ~~for myself~~t to me.
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- Tomorrow I need go to down town, and buy somethings that my mommy needs.
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- Tomorrow I need go to down town, and buy somethings that my mommy needs.¶
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  Tomorrow I have to go to town and buy some things that my mother needs.
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- I feel so glamd 'cause I need hug my mom.ciao.
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- I feel so glamd 'cause I need hug my mom.ciao.¶
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  I feel so glad because I need a hug from my mom. Bye.
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