添削

the heart of humen人类都很复杂，尤其是我们的心。我们的心都有骨头和肉相隔着，所以我们总是听不清它在说什么。在这个世界上，有一个半的人，一个能看穿你的心，另外的半个是理解你的人。大家生活在不同的环境，接触不同的人和事，被形成的我们本来就是不一样的。正因为我们的不同，所以我们都是孤独的，我们一个人来到这个世上，最后也是一个人独自离开。一个心脏里面有两个心房，就像一个身体里面有两个我一样。 Humen is compilicated,especially their heart.I always don't understand it.We always can't hear what the heart say clearly because it have been separated from the bone and meat.There are 1.5 persons in this world,one can see through your heart,the another 0.5 person can understand you.Everyone live and grow up in the different enviroment ,touch different person and meet different things.What we have been created are different, All of us are lonly because of the different.We came to this world by ourselves at the begining ,and will leave from it by ourselves at last .There are two atrium in our heart, as like two different me in one body.When i writing this , i am hearing this song of a hongkong singer" 郑秀文-------如果我们不再见" If you like my short essay,please send the mail to tell me.^^