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  • July 7th.

    • Today I finished the summer classes at University.
    • I feel so tired of my eyes, but I feel good 'cause I waited and walked throuth the campus with my girlfriend, after, leaved her in his class.
    • She's got a cherry lips and and pink short hair, she is pretty beutiful girl.
    • She's very strong in her decitions, she is very compromise with his things, I like that, but sometimes I wish that she settle down and live her life, all is not study.
    • Since last year, she change the color of her hair, and I think that she's something mystical, before always the dressed with black wear, shirt of her favorite bands, now, she dress with warm colors.
  • I really love that.

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    • I feel so tired of my eyes, but I feel good 'cause I waited and walked throuth the campus with my girlfriend, after, leaved her in his class.
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    • I feel so tired of my eyesMy eyes are so tired, but I feel good 'cause I waited and walked throutgh the campus with my girlfriend, and after, I leavedft her in hiser class.room.
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    • She's very strong in her decitions, she is very compromise with his things, I like that, but sometimes I wish that she settle down and live her life, all is not study.
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    • She's very strong in her decitions, she is very compromise with his things, I like that, but sometimes I wish that she settle down and live her life, all is not study.

      She has direction in her life and is very focused on accomplishing her goals, which I like; nonetheless, I wish that she would or could relax a little bit more and enjoy life. It can't always be about studying. There's more to life.
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    • Since last year, she change the color of her hair, and I think that she's something mystical, before always the dressed with black wear, shirt of her favorite bands, now, she dress with warm colors.
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    • Since last year, she change the color of her hair, and I think that she's something mystical, before always the dressed with black wear, shirt of her favorite bands, now, she dress with warm colors.

      In the past she often dressed in black. Now, she dresses in warm colors and even has a new hairstyle. She's simply mystical.
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