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    • Today I don't feel like writing so between Japanese and English I chose English because it's the easiest one for me.
    • I decided to also write in English in my diary because even if I think that my level of is not too bad, trying to regularly write a little bit of English can't be bad.
    • Today, when we were coming back from some field work I received a great news.
    • I am accepted in my master degree in France.
    • On top of that I'm also accepted in the erasmus program so if everything go on well, next year I will spend 1 year in Madrid.

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    • Today I don't feel like writing so between Japanese and English I chose English because it's the easiest one for me.
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    • Today I don't feel like writing, so between Japanese and English I chose English because it's the easiest oneeasier for me.
    • Today I don't feel like writing so between Japanese and English I chose English because it's the easiest one for me.
    • Today I doidn't feel like writing so between Japanese and English, I chose English because it's the easiest oneeasier for me.
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    • I decided to also write in English in my diary because even if I think that my level of is not too bad, trying to regularly write a little bit of English can't be bad.
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    • I also decided to also write in English in my diary because even if I think that my level of is not too bad, trying to regularly write a little bit of English can't be bad.
    • Also, I decided to also write in English in my diary because even if I think that my level of is not too bad, trying to regularly write a little bit of English can't be bad.
    • I decided to also write in Englishuse English when writing in my diary because even if I think that my level of is not too bad, trying to regularly write a little bit of English can't be badhurt.
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    • I also decided to also write in English in my diary because even ifthough I think that my level of is not toso bad, trying to regularly write a little bit of English regularly can't be bad.
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    • On top of that I'm also accepted in the erasmus program so if everything go on well, next year I will spend 1 year in Madrid.
      투표하세요!
    • On top of that I'm also accepted in the erasmus program so if everything go ones well, next year I will spend 1 year in Madrid.
    • On top of that, I'm also accepted in the eErasmus program so if everything go on well, next year I will spend 1 year in Madrid.
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    • On top of that, I'm have also been accepted in the eErasmus program, so if everything go ones well, next year I will spend 1a year in Madrid next year.
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