添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

Lauraklからのテキスト - English

    • My personal goal in learning English

    • I want to learn English because it's a very popular language and spoke by many people especially business domain that is very connected with my studies and therefore my future job.
    • Also, first of all, it's a language that I like so much and I want to learn for my own pleasure.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English