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    • Shortly before the start at 19:30, the participant's excitement could be felt in the air.The circuit was lined with enthusiastic supporters whose cheers, even despite the tropical temperatures, motivated the runners to keep on running no matter what(at all cost?).
    • Even our company's best trained runners among the 30,000 got caught up in the atmosphere in the stadium.
    • The celebration went on for a long time culminating in wonderful fireworks displayed at 21:45 to commemorate the ten year anniversary.

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    • Shortly before the start at 19:30, the participant's excitement could be felt in the air.The circuit was lined with enthusiastic supporters whose cheers, even despite the tropical temperatures, motivated the runners to keep on running no matter what(at all cost?).
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    • Shortly before the start at 19:30, the participant's excitement could be felt in the air. The circuit was lined with enthusiastic supporters whose cheers, even despite the tropical temperatures, motivated the runners to keep on running no matter what(the at all cost?).
    • Shortly before the start, at 19:30, the participant's excitement could be felt in the air. The circuit was lined with enthusiastic supporters whose cheers, even despite the tropical temperatures, motivated the runners to keep on running, no matter what(at all cost?).
      100% GOOD (2 votes)
    • Shortly before the start at 19:30, the participant's' excitement could be felt in the air.The circuit was lined with enthusiastic supporters whose cheers, even despite the tropical temperatures, motivated the runners to keep on running no matter what(at allthe cost?).
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Shortly before the start at 19:30, the participant's' excitement could be felt in the air.The circuit was lined with enthusiastic supporters whose cheers, even despite the tropical temperatures, motivated the runners to keep on running no matter what(at all cost?).
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  • 문장 2
    • Even our company's best trained runners among the 30,000 got caught up in the atmosphere in the stadium.
      투표하세요!
    • Even our company's best trained runners among the 30,000 got caught up in the atmosphere inof the stadium.
    • Even our company's best trained runners among the 30,000, got caught up in the atmosphere in the stadium.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Even our company's best trained runners, who were among the 30,000, got caught up in the atmosphere in the stadium.
      투표하세요!
    • Even our company's best trained runners among the 30,000 people got caught up in the atmosphere in the stadium.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
  • 문장 3
    • The celebration went on for a long time culminating in wonderful fireworks displayed at 21:45 to commemorate the ten year anniversary.
      투표하세요!
    • The celebration went on for a long time culminating in a wonderful fireworks displayed at 21:45 to commemorate the ten -year anniversary.
    • The celebration went on for a long time, culminating in wonderful fireworks displayed at 21:45, to commemorate the ten year anniversary.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • The celebration went on for a long time culminating in wonderful fireworks displayed at 21:45 to commemorate the ten -year anniversary.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3