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I would like to meet new friends
- Hello, I am a newcomer in Canada and I am looking for some friends to improve my English and French.I am married and I live in Montreal.
- My wife and me would like to meet more friends .
- I'd be glad if you contact me by this email : amohamadizade@yahoo.com

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- Hello, I am a newcomer in Canada and I am looking for some friends to improve my English and French.I am married and I live in Montreal.
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- Hello, I am a newcomer in Canada and I am looking for some friends to improve my English and French. I am married and I live in Montreal.
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- My wife and me would like to meet more friends .
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- My wife and meI would like to meet more friends .
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- I'd be glad if you contact me by this email : amohamadizade@yahoo.com
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- I~~'d be glad~~t's okay if you contact me by this email : amohamadizade@yahoo.com ¶
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- ~~I'd be glad if you~~You can contact me by this email : : amohamadizade@yahoo.com ¶
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