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    • Some people think that graffiti is another form of art, while others think that graffiti is a vandalism.
    • However, who is right?
    • To my opinion, graffiti is a special kind of art in case if it is depicted in appropriate places.
    • Earlier, graffiti was mostly distributed to people, who live in the poorest countries, drawing graffiti was the way of self-expression of the local artists.
    • But nowadays, there are many outdoor exhibitions and galleries of graffiti even in the wealthiest countries of the world.
    • It is important to note that this kind of art is developing artist's creativity, spatial imagination, and non-standard thinking.
    • Nevertheless, some people are not agree with my arguments.
    • They are convinced that graffiti is a desecration of buildings, statues and even sacred places with violent disrespect.
    • But I would argue with this opinion.
    • One should take into account the fact that if government will give the opportunity to draw graffiti in a relevant area, then these acts of violence will cease.
    • All thing considered, I am still convinced that our society needs a great prospect for the expression their talents and abilities.
    • Hence, we should attach more importance to the developing of graffiti all over the world.

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    • Some people think that graffiti is another form of art, while others think that graffiti is a vandalism.
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    • Some people think that graffiti is another form of art, while others think that graffiti is a vandalism.
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    • Some people think that graffiti is another form of art, while others think that graffiti is a vandalism.
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    • To my opinion, graffiti is a special kind of art in case if it is depicted in appropriate places.
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    • ToIn my opinion, graffiti is a special kind of art in case if it is depicted in appropriate places.
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    • To my opinion, graffiti is a special kind of art in case if, as long as it is depicted in appropriate places.
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    • ToIn my opinion, graffiti is a special kind of art in case if it i's depicted in appropriate places.
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    • Earlier, graffiti was mostly distributed to people, who live in the poorest countries, drawing graffiti was the way of self-expression of the local artists.
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    • Earlier, graffiti was mostly distributed to people, who lived in the poorest countries, drawing graffiti was the way of self-expression of the local artists.
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    • EarlierPreviously, graffiti was mostly distributed tomade by people, who live in the poorest countries, drawing graffiti was the way of self-expression of the local artists.
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    • EarlierPreviously, graffiti was mostly disattributed to people, who lived in the poorest countries, d. Drawing graffiti was thea way of self-expression ofor the local artists.
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    • EarlierAt first, graffiti was mostly distributed tomade by people, who live in the poorest countries, d. Drawing graffiti was thea way of self-expression ofor the local artists.
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    • But nowadays, there are many outdoor exhibitions and galleries of graffiti even in the wealthiest countries of the world.
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    • But nowadays, there are many outdoor exhibitions and galleries of graffiti, even in the wealthiest countries of the world.
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    • But nowadays, there are's many outdoor exhibitions and galleries of graffiti, even in the wealthiest countries of the world.
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    • It is important to note that this kind of art is developing artist's creativity, spatial imagination, and non-standard thinking.
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    • It is important to note that this kind of art is developings the artist's creativity, spatial imagination, and non-standardabstract thinking.
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    • It i's important to note that this kind of art is developing an artist's creativity, spatial imagination, and non-standard thinking.
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    • They are convinced that graffiti is a desecration of buildings, statues and even sacred places with violent disrespect.
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    • They are convinced that graffiti is a desecration of buildings, statues and even sacred places with violent disrespect.
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    • They a're convinced that graffiti is a desecration of buildings, statues, and even sacred places with violent disrespect.
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    • One should take into account the fact that if government will give the opportunity to draw graffiti in a relevant area, then these acts of violence will cease.
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    • One should take into account the fact that if government will give the opportunity to draw graffiti in a relevant area, then these acts of violence will cease.
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    • One should take into account the fact that if government will gives give artists the opportunity to draw graffiti in a relevant area, then these acts of violence will cease.
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    • One should take into account the fact that if the government willcould give the opportunity to draw graffiti in a relevant area, then these acts of violence willould cease.
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    • One should take into account the fact that if government willould give the opportunity to draw graffiti in a relevant area, then these acts of violence willould cease.
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    • All thing considered, I am still convinced that our society needs a great prospect for the expression their talents and abilities.
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    • All thing considered, I am still convinced that our society needs a great prospectn opportunity for the expression theirse artists' talents and abilities.
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    • All things considered, I am still convinced that people in our society needs a great prospect for then opportunity to expression their talents and abilities.
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    • All things considered, I a'm still convinced that our society needs a great prospectopportunities for the expression their talents and abilities.
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