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  • short story

    • Hi!My name is Galina.I am 29 years old.I would like to tell one short story about my baby.She is 3.Her name is Elithabet and she is very cunning and naughty.So in the morning I and Liza had gathered strawberry.I gave a plate my dauther that she would pick up it herself.I started to pick up strawberry and put into my plate than i turned and saw the nex picture:Liza had taking my strawberry from my plate and putting it into her plate.She had saying" You can gather yourself more":).
    • Liza is impish and it is not easy whith her sometimes but i love her very much.My husbund is in a business trip now.In august he will coming back and we will go to Azov sea whith the whole family.
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    • Hi!My name is Galina.I am 29 years old.I would like to tell one short story about my baby.She is 3.Her name is Elithabet and she is very cunning and naughty.So in the morning I and Liza had gathered strawberry.I gave a plate my dauther that she would pick up it herself.I started to pick up strawberry and put into my plate than i turned and saw the nex picture:Liza had taking my strawberry from my plate and putting it into her plate.She had saying" You can gather yourself more":).
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    • Hi!My name is Galina.I am 29 years old.I would like to tell onea short story about my baby.She is 3.Her name is Elithabet and she is very cunning and naughty.So in the morning ILiza and LizaI had gathered strawberryies .I gave a plate to my dautherghter so that she would pick up itchoose then by herself.I started to pick up my strawberryies and put ithem onto my plate thaen iI turned and saw the nex picture:what she had been up to. Liza hadwas taking mythe strawberryies from my plate and putting it ithem onto her plate.She had sayingsaid " You can gather more yourself more":).
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    • Hi!My name is Galina.I am 29 years old.I would like to tell one short story about my baby.She is 3.Her name is Elithabet and she is very cunning and naughty.So in thsome morning Ime and Liza had gathered strawberry.I gave a plate my dauther that she would pick up itit up herself.I started to pick up strawberry and put into my plate than i turned and saw the nex picture:Liza had takingat Liza took my strawberry from my plate and putting it into her plate.She had sayingsaid" You can gather yourself more":).
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    • Liza is impish and it is not easy whith her sometimes but i love her very much.My husbund is in a business trip now.In august he will coming back and we will go to Azov sea whith the whole family.
      Vote agora!
    • Liza is impisha little rascal and it is not easy whith her sometimes but i love her very much.My husbuand is ion a business trip now.In augusat the will coming back and we will go tomoment. He is coming back in August and we are going to the Azov sea whith the whole family.
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  • Sentença 3