添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

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  • Big protest in the Turkish square

    • Today, in the afternoon, I watched the channel CNN.
    • Live from Turkey was happened a big protest in the Turkish square.
    • People were protest against decision of the governor that build a big Shopping Center in the park.
    • The people did not like that decision, so They organised a big protest by facebook and other social networks.

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