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    • "Why is TV bad for us?"

    • I would like to express my opinion about the article "Why is TV bad for us?".
    • I think that TV is useful for some people, because it encourages us to play sports.
    • A variety of sports programs, shows, encourage us to go for a run or to the gym.
  • Although it is true that some television programs are trivial, documentaries can teach us a lot about the world.
    • Such programs as "Secrets of the Planet Earth", "Hidden Worlds" or "Riddles of the Cosmos", tell us about the mysteries of the universe.
    • The TV really reduces mental performance.
    • While watching the broadcasts, the human brain is not looking for new solutions to any problems.
    • Creativity is completely replaced by a continuous view of the finished information product.
    • To see this, it's enough to remember what your physical and moral state was after watching TV for a long time.
  • Your brain is absolutely stalled, fatigue overcomes you and constantly tends to sleep, thoughts are constantly confused.
    • It becomes habitual for you to forget and reduce the ability to think abstractly.
    • Despite everything, a TV is a good way to relax after a hard day.
    • Comedy programs can cheer you up and forget about problems.
    • But on TV screens, I often see scenes of violence and aggressive behavior.
    • Data on the negative impact of watching violence on television is significant and convincing.
    • Young people regularly observe similar scenes, perceive aggression as normal and acceptable behavior.
    • Moreover, after provocation, many become really more aggressive.

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