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    • Today I'll talk about manbags because I read an article about it and I want to practice some words and expressions related to this subject.
    • Despite the fact it's a stylish accessory that many modern men are carrying, especially the youngest, I haven't bought it yet.
    • I don't think I'm too tied up to that idea of masculinity that doesn't allow certain kind of men to use it.
    • I mean I don't give it a lot of thought, but I still prefer my fanny pack, even though you can't use it to carry on as many items as a manbag.
    • I can recognise that a manbag is attractive and useful but it's also an expensive additional item to carry on with you.
    • Anyway if I had to choose between a manbag and an uncomfortable briefcase, I'd have no doubts: I always choose what it's comfortable and give you more freedom to move.
    • I don't know if manbags have the same success in USA they have had in Europe.

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    • Today I'll talk about manbags because I read an article about it and I want to practice some words and expressions related to this subject.
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    • Today I'll talk about manbags because I read an article about it. and I want to practice some words and expressions related to this subject.
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    • Today I'll am going to talk about manbags because I have read an article about it and I want to practice some words and expressions related to this subject.
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    • Despite the fact it's a stylish accessory that many modern men are carrying, especially the youngest, I haven't bought it yet.
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    • Despite the factAlthough it's a stylish accessory that many modern men are carrying, especially the youngest men, I haven't bought itone yet.
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    • Despite the fact it's a stylish accessory that many modern men are carrying, especially the youngest, ones,but I haven't bought it yet.
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    • I don't think I'm too tied up to that idea of masculinity that doesn't allow certain kind of men to use it.
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    • I don't think I'm too tied up tobelieve thate idea of masculinity that doesn't allowprevents certain kinds of men to use it.
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    • I mean I don't give it a lot of thought, but I still prefer my fanny pack, even though you can't use it to carry on as many items as a manbag.
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    • I mean, I don't give it a lot of thought, b. But, I still prefer my fanny pack, even though you can't use it to carry on as many items as a manbag.
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    • I can recognise that a manbag is attractive and useful but it's also an expensive additional item to carry on with you.
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    • I can recognise thatrealize a manbag is attractive and useful but it's also an expensive additional item to carry on with you.
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    • Anyway if I had to choose between a manbag and an uncomfortable briefcase, I'd have no doubts: I always choose what it's comfortable and give you more freedom to move.
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    • Anyway, if I had to choose between a manbag and an uncomfortable briefcase, I'd have no doubts:. I always choose what it's comfortable and give yous more freedom to move.
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