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  • A great inspiration

    • The person who inspires me a lot is my father, I'm always happy to see him because he knows how to show the affection he gives me.
    • He is the first person with whom I want to share my happiness and who will be happy for me sincerely and without ulterior motives and besides it already does it.
    • It's the hand that helps me to get up when I feel sad and soothes me when I only see contempt or indifference around me.
    • He is a true model for me because he is someone who has always succeeded in everything he undertakes despite the obstacles and difficulties he has always found the right way to achieve his goals, the friends qualify his spirit humility.
    • Thanks for all daddy.

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    • He is the first person with whom I want to share my happiness and who will be happy for me sincerely and without ulterior motives and besides it already does it.
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    • He is the first person with whom I want to share my happiness with and who will sincerely be happy for me sincerely and, without ulterior motives and besides it already does it.
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    • He is the first person with whom I want to share my happiness and who. He will be happy for me sincerely and without ulterior motives and besides it already does it.
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    • He is the first person with whom I want to share my happiness with, and who will be genuinely happy for me sincerely and without ulterior motives and besides it already does it.
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    • He is a true model for me because he is someone who has always succeeded in everything he undertakes despite the obstacles and difficulties he has always found the right way to achieve his goals, the friends qualify his spirit humility.
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    • He is a true role model for me because he is someone who has always succeeded in everything he undertakes. And despite the obstacles and difficulties, he has always found the right way to achieve his goals, the friends qualify his spirit humility.
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